eat_sleep_study_die

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Turns out I have many readers who are 11 or 10 omg T~T guys please don't get influenced by me I say a lot of a bad shit pls as ur senior pls dint learn anyrbitn from me

SewerRat94

@eat_sleep_study_die Yeah, a lot of the people on this app are young teenagers or children ;-; I forget too, even though I used to be one of them LMAO
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MuichirosGirl4Life

@eat_sleep_study_die 
          	  Nah, it's alright. I learnt bad stuff at a young age and doesn't really show. All good.
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Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta

... thank god that I am 14 *sighs in relief*
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eat_sleep_study_die

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Turns out I have many readers who are 11 or 10 omg T~T guys please don't get influenced by me I say a lot of a bad shit pls as ur senior pls dint learn anyrbitn from me

SewerRat94

@eat_sleep_study_die Yeah, a lot of the people on this app are young teenagers or children ;-; I forget too, even though I used to be one of them LMAO
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MuichirosGirl4Life

@eat_sleep_study_die 
            Nah, it's alright. I learnt bad stuff at a young age and doesn't really show. All good.
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Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta

... thank god that I am 14 *sighs in relief*
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eat_sleep_study_die

Okay I'm gonna complete my tangled hearts book by this month but I kinda forgot my story so I'm rereading so pls bare with me

Not11Avery

@eat_sleep_study_die dude I've literally never been happier tysm I need to reread too it's been years 
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eat_sleep_study_die

Yall I feel like these people who are asking for illustration are bots am I the only one?

Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta

@eat_sleep_study_die like what I mean embrass them publicly then if someone else asks just tell them if they want to be embrassed publicly or not
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Apple864

@eat_sleep_study_die it’s just so annoying that scammers would put such a horrible stain on a digital masterpiece of writing unlike my English essay
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eat_sleep_study_die

The goat has updated 
          
          (Yeah I called myself a goat tf is ur problem)

Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta

Hi I'm asking for tips into making my new AU GiyuShino book and I couldn't think about anyone except you Ray... (you could delete it if you want, no biggie :>) so could you give me some tips
          (PS: it is about Shinobu is a princess in a kingdom named netherlands and was sent to the enemy kingdom SkySpire as a maid (but really just a spy) when Giyuu (the crown prince of SkySpire) meets her he falls inlove (more like obssesed) for the first time)
          but here are the things that happens (plot twists)
          1. Aoi is 13 and Giyuu is 24
          2. Giyuu has two curses (one he pupils changes if he feels one of his 13 emotions two is that if he turned 25 without a lady conciving his child he will become a dragon)
          3. Sanemi is Giyuu's knight and body guard (+ Sanemi is older than Giyuu by 3 years and had been working for 8 years)
          4. Kanae (crown princess of Neatherlands), Makomo and Sabito are alive
          5. Tsutako being killed by a gang
          
          
          
          (if you want more info talk to me in email or whatsapp and please don't copy meh idea)

Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta

OKAY THANKS (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡
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eat_sleep_study_die

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@Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta look I suggest don't allow them If u don't want to...also I mostly write my stories in third person pov but the tips I can give u 
            
            Balance the inner thoughts with actual stuff happening. too much "i thought this" turns into a boring lecture that drags on forever, but if its all action with zero thoughts it feels flat and empty. let their personality leak into every description - like if your characters paranoid as hell theyll think everyones out to get them even on a simple coffee run. dont just slap "i" on everything or it gets repetitive fast. make their voice unique, the way they talk in their head. sarcastic? anxious? funny? bitter? use short choppy sentences when theyre stressed and rambling run-on thoughts when theyre overthinking. instead of saying "i was scared" try something like "my heart slammed against my ribs like it wanted out and i kept telling myself dont be a bitch but fuck it wasnt working." that way it feels real and pulls the reader right into their head without sounding forced.
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Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta

yea I want help, like I try to be cheerful, but I always get offers from artists that want to make it a comic but I want to, it annoying? I dont know. they keep asking... like if you see my story named (Hashira's Garden) they ask me even if I refuse publicly. I lowkey need help with my first POV if you saw what i had wrote
            ~love the cat trio
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eat_sleep_study_die

i know no one gives 2 shits and i have been basically dead but the network i have some issues with wattpad due to DNS resolution issues so i cant use wattpad much....i have to use a vpn every time its so annoying

eat_sleep_study_die

@SewerRat94 I'm doing great and ik I'm turning into an unc too
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SewerRat94

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@eat_sleep_study_die  Yeah same!!!! Sorry we lost touch ToT I'm still making my weird shit even tho i'm unc now...  hope you've been doing well <3 and happy you're still creating!
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eat_sleep_study_die

@SewerRat94 I MISSED U SM U ARE LIKE MY OLDEST FOLLWER/ FRIEND ON WATTPAD
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Cristian-girl

Hii, good morning/afternoon/night, sorry, I'd like to ask for permission to translate your GiyuuShino Story, Is that okay with you? :) I'll be waiting for your answer!! 

Cristian-girl

@ eat_sleep_study_die  OHH THX!!
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Cristian-girl

@ Cristian-girl  (GiyuuShino)
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