MuichirosGirl4Life
Hey, you alive?
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If you guys ever want me to write about another Fandom which one would it be?
Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta
I agree with @MuichirosGirl4Life (they did add some touches in my idea and I thank them for it!!) •ᴗ•
MuichirosGirl4Life
@eat_sleep_study_die Mm... That idea isn't bad!(´∀｀)♡ I like it... Maybe... A not depressing and sad story like Mr. President. Can you do that the Hashiras go to a boarding school and they all live in the same dorm. Like their dorm take up the entire floor but their rooms are split by walls for privacy. They all live together with GiyuShino, SaneKana, ObaMitsu. The popular ships. Yeah and maybe... You decide the rest. Your still my fag author tho! I'm counting on you!┐(￣ヮ￣)┌
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Guys omg I got a new digi cam and it's the best thing ever I love it
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Turns out I have many readers who are 11 or 10 omg T~T guys please don't get influenced by me I say a lot of a bad shit pls as ur senior pls dint learn anyrbitn from me
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@BerriAnime LMAO U ARE STILL THERE
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Okay I'm gonna complete my tangled hearts book by this month but I kinda forgot my story so I'm rereading so pls bare with me
Not11Avery
@eat_sleep_study_die dude I've literally never been happier tysm I need to reread too it's been years
Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta
@eat_sleep_study_die kay i understand (just take your time and please make the biggest plot twist in history)
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Yall I feel like these people who are asking for illustration are bots am I the only one?
Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta
@eat_sleep_study_die like what I mean embrass them publicly then if someone else asks just tell them if they want to be embrassed publicly or not
Apple864
@eat_sleep_study_die it’s just so annoying that scammers would put such a horrible stain on a digital masterpiece of writing unlike my English essay
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The goat has updated
(Yeah I called myself a goat tf is ur problem)
arachnophxbia
Attack on peak
Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta
Hi I'm asking for tips into making my new AU GiyuShino book and I couldn't think about anyone except you Ray... (you could delete it if you want, no biggie :>) so could you give me some tips
(PS: it is about Shinobu is a princess in a kingdom named netherlands and was sent to the enemy kingdom SkySpire as a maid (but really just a spy) when Giyuu (the crown prince of SkySpire) meets her he falls inlove (more like obssesed) for the first time)
but here are the things that happens (plot twists)
1. Aoi is 13 and Giyuu is 24
2. Giyuu has two curses (one he pupils changes if he feels one of his 13 emotions two is that if he turned 25 without a lady conciving his child he will become a dragon)
3. Sanemi is Giyuu's knight and body guard (+ Sanemi is older than Giyuu by 3 years and had been working for 8 years)
4. Kanae (crown princess of Neatherlands), Makomo and Sabito are alive
5. Tsutako being killed by a gang
(if you want more info talk to me in email or whatsapp and please don't copy meh idea)
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@Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta look I suggest don't allow them If u don't want to...also I mostly write my stories in third person pov but the tips I can give u Balance the inner thoughts with actual stuff happening. too much "i thought this" turns into a boring lecture that drags on forever, but if its all action with zero thoughts it feels flat and empty. let their personality leak into every description - like if your characters paranoid as hell theyll think everyones out to get them even on a simple coffee run. dont just slap "i" on everything or it gets repetitive fast. make their voice unique, the way they talk in their head. sarcastic? anxious? funny? bitter? use short choppy sentences when theyre stressed and rambling run-on thoughts when theyre overthinking. instead of saying "i was scared" try something like "my heart slammed against my ribs like it wanted out and i kept telling myself dont be a bitch but fuck it wasnt working." that way it feels real and pulls the reader right into their head without sounding forced.
Y0r11ch1_L0v35_Uta
yea I want help, like I try to be cheerful, but I always get offers from artists that want to make it a comic but I want to, it annoying? I dont know. they keep asking... like if you see my story named (Hashira's Garden) they ask me even if I refuse publicly. I lowkey need help with my first POV if you saw what i had wrote
~love the cat trio