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If you could read my story and review about it
          
          If you liked it,  You can edit it too.
          
          Okay , Bye ! Thanks love x

Hello there! Thanks for the follow (I followed you back) 
          Have a great day/night (?) 

Oh and I followed back

Hey hey hey
          thanks for the follow! 
          don't usually like to do this but I need some constructive criticism on my works 
          you don't  have to but I would really appreciate it
          thanks