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Hi! Thank you so much for commenting on Broken, it means a lot to me! Feel free to PM me anytime you want, much love xx

hello! I'm sorry if im disturbing your style of writing but I think maybe you can have a better format like for example
          
          " It wasn't my fault, I swear!" Hanyu said with fear evident in his eyes.
          
          As this format attracts many readers and it shows maturity in the writing. I hope you dont take it negatively!