Um, I just finished the shorter version of this story, and I loved it, but I clicked on your name to beg/ask you to please keep it going, because after I found the longer version I went to chapter 80, only to not find it in the same way that the shorter versions chapter went, and now in my head I see the longer story in my head, and hope that you continue with the shorter version!! I know that writer's write how they speak, and I cringe every time I read the F*** word, and you use it 3 or 4 times each chapter! Can I ask you to curb it? Meaning not to cut them out totally, but not as many??