Helloo! I just finished reading the prologue, and it was actually intriguing. The concept for the MC being a runaway was a good move. It would give the readers a sense of foreboding, kasi what if matagpuan siya ng kamag-anak niya? Anong mangyayari if ever?
For the writing style, it was okay and easy to visualize. The dialogues between the characters are good as well. The emotions are there and can be felt.
All in all, you’re off to a good start! Keep it up bb!❤️