eilishburn

NEW PROLOGUE PUBLISHED FOR CRIMINAL :) https://www.wattpad.com/story/178388335

sanzojoe

I’m excited to reread this!
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eilishburn

! IMPORTANT PLEASE READ !
          
          As you might've noticed, the book "Criminal" is no longer published. Don't worry, I haven't deleted it, it's still saved as a DRAFT, and I will soon publish it again. 
          
          Except it'll be different. I am rewriting the story because I feel like I haven't thought enough on a plot or about the characters, and it really harmed the story. So, I am re-writing the chapters and publishing them again. And this time, I beg you guys to leave feedback so that I know that the story is better or not. If you would like me to publish the old story later on, I can totally do that since I'll be saving the chapters. Just let me know and if enough people would want it I'll give it. 
          
          Anyways, not much will change, the story will still have the same storyline and plot, but with more depth and I'll give the characters actual goals. 
          
          So I hope that's fine with all of you, and I'll hopefully see you in the new version of "Criminal"! :) 
          
          PSA: Please do NOT leave your house if it's not an absolute necessity, and if you do make sure to WEAR A MASK and WASH YOUR HANDS a lot!! AND DO NOT PANIC BUY PLEASE! 
          
          Anyways,  have a nice day/night!! :)
          - eilishburn

Hailyheaven

Eilishburn can you please publish the the old story I really would like to read it again pls
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eilishburn

it’s so hard to type with these 3 layers of bandages on my thumb sksnks 
          
          anyways i was thinking of rewriting Criminal after I complete it. It will be a different book so for those who actually like the original you can totally just go and read that but I think that as the story went on I kinda added more ideas that got lost in the plot so the beginning has a totally different plot than the recent chapters. Also I wanted to focus more on Naruto’s criminal career but I ended up focusing more on the romance, so that’s one thing i wanna change. 
          
          what are your thoughts on this? let me know!

eilishburn

yes, keep the original but publish version 2.0 as a separate book :) 
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sanzojoe

So like keep the original but also add version 2.0?  Over all I’m always cool with rewriting if you think it will make the story better lol
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eilishburn

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IM ALIVE!!! IM ALIVE! SORRY GUYS I LEFT Y’ALL FOR LIKE MONTHS IM SO SORRY SJSNSJ
          
          but let me answer a question i’ve been getting nonstop: 
          
          “When will you be updating Criminal?” 
          
          Ok, so, here’s the thing. I have exams in April and in May and since i’m super dumb i gotta study extra hard, so that’s what i’ve been doing this entire time.....and also finishing some horrible school projects jansjs. 
          
          and remember when I said I had drafted a chapter? Yeah, well I read it and it was really really bad so I started re-writing it all. This is a really important chapter and I want to make it  good for you guys!!! Especially since you’ve been waiting for one for a long ass time!!! :( 
          
          But I’ll publish a sneak peak of the next chapter to HOPEFULLY quench your thirst... just the first bit though. 
          
          Also, this chapter is already at 3000 words so I’m just letting you guys know, it’s gonna be really long... But idk of that takes some fun out of it. Let me know if you prefer long or short chapters. 
          
          If you guys wanna see what I’m up to, by the way, or want more frequent news on Criminal, feel free to follow me on twitter (where I post the most random tweets on Earth) @ramensnacc :) 
          
          But to answer your question of “when” I will update it, I’m really not sure at this point. If you want a shorter chapter I can probably upload it soon, like in 10 days, but if you want a long one it’s gonna take up to a month or so. 
          
          I’m guessing with that information you guys would want a shorter one LOL but yeah please let me know :) 
          
          And also how are you guys? I hope you’re staying at home and taking care of yourself!!! I don’t want any of you getting sick :( 
          
          Anyways, thank you thank you thank you for your patience honestly if I were you i would’ve given up after a week LMAO but yeah thank you guys I really do appreciate it. 
          
          So yeah, go check out the sneak peak that I’ve uploaded! Have a great day/night :)
          
          love, eilishburn