pendinglove

Right I need ur help, I’m trying to write a blurb for my proper book I need your help to choose which one is better which one makes you want to read the book more?
          
          1-
          The Darlingtons have always been the people everyone wanted to be, purely for their admirable lifestyle. Perfect parents, perfect children, perfect house, perfect life.
           But this model family starts to come crashing down as war looms over all of their lives, changing them forever in more ways than they ever imagined.
          Unexplored family histories, cold blooded revenge, and a lot of lightning leaves the Darlington brothers, Luke and Grayson, on their own to sort their lives and family out.
          After their twisted story, will the Darlingtons be the perfect family with a fairytale ending?
          Only time will tell.
          
          
          OR
          
          2- 
          Luke and Grayson Darlington have the perfect life. It’s a known thing in their family. The Darlingtons are flawless.
          But a radio announcement commencing ear tears that apart, bringing cold blooded revenge, an evil plot, mystery, enemies, and reveals the true depths of their family history, not to mention the bolts of lightning flying between their fingers.

eillimim

@isimpforhpboys29 AHH YES OF COURSE BESTIE TAKE YOUR TIME TO DO IT RIGHTTTT
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pendinglove

@eillimim
            ALSO IM RRLY TRYING ON LUNAR ECLIPSE I JUST HAVE NO IDEAS I WANT TO NAKE SURE HER FIRST FULL MOON IS WRITTEN PERCECT
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pendinglove

OMG ON THE SECOND ONE I MEANT WAR INSTEAD OF EAR 
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pendinglove

what did you think of it? 
          btw I’ve spaced it out now so people can comment on each separate section 

pendinglove

 THE NEXT PART IS UPP
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pendinglove

IM WORKING ON PART 3 NOW
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pendinglove

 THANK YOU THERE SHOULD BE ANOTHER UPDATE TODAY
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