ekskrr

Ik heb weer is over Dacre en Basten nagedacht, waarna ik probeerde om verder te schrijven, maar ik kwam erachter dat het verhaal gewoon een beetje... dood is. Ik heb alle verhaallijnen weggesnoeid met al die keren dat ik niet zo veel inspiratie had (Ik wist niet eens dat ik dat kon), dus nu ben ik alles hier en daar iets aan het veranderen. Ik ga proberen om het tussen vandaag en maandag volledig te updaten!

ekskrr

Updaaaateeee! Ik hoop dat het er allemaal wat minder saai van wordt. ;0
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wenmaw

Hey, was hoping you could answer some questions about pacing for my story. Did you feel like ch 5,6,7 were slow?

wenmaw

Thanks that really helps! On my third edit trying to make it better! Always open to advise or feedback <3
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ekskrr

I'm not finished reading yet but looking forward too :)))
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ekskrr

Oooh no prob!!! I'm feeling honoured that you are asking!!! :)) I don't know if it was chap 4, 5,6, but there was a part where the main character was revealing a lot about her past in the beginning, and that felt not necessary at that point! (It was about how she lived, the friends that were suddenly taken etc) A main character is lovely when they have secrets which are slowly revealed:)) Like u could sprinkle that stuff more throughout the story, like specific stuff that reminds her of that time or whatevs ❤️
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The-Scrivener

Hello beautiful esk, thank  for including I'm a Cyborg's Pet on to your reading list . That comes over a little strange I guess thanking you for such a small act, but as new authors such as, I don't know, us we get a real boost every time someone comes across our work . 
          We could hug you until our arms go numb RK+Reb
          
           While I'm typing my co-author will kill me if I don't mention our new hysterical book The Alpha's concubine.