electricblue

Surprise! Chapter 5 for the rewritten version of The Locker Room is published. Five chapters done and ya know only a few to go. Just kidding there's lots more. 
          	
          	I'm just going to keep this short and say sorry that I haven't uploaded sooner. Please check it out and maybe even comment or vote. It helps a lot. Thanks again.

vanshikasinhaa

hey are gonn complete TLR2 anytime soon
          it was like one of the best story i have read on Wattpad 
          i really want to see kane and audrey together 

electricblue

@vanshikasinhaa Aw thank you! I wrote TLR when I was a teenager as well. I'm proud of it but I know it could be better. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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vanshikasinhaa

yesterday i started reading it in the morning and then i was like this one's so addicting and i literally completed it in one day without doing any other work.......you are a really great writer and when i was reading it i couldn't believe it that it was written by a young writer it was sooo good❤️
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electricblue

@vanshikasinhaa I'm honestly not going to finish TLR2 anytime soon. I put that one on hold to finish the edited version of TLR. TLR had a lot of plot holes, and I didn't think I could continue TLR2 because of this. Thank you for enjoying TLR and taking the time to read it. I really want to see Audrey and Kane together as well. You may send me a message and talk more about TLR
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justbeingsomething

When are you going to update the sequel of TLR? It is so intresting and I can't wait but you haven't posted anything new on this story since 2013 sooo are you going to post or I should stop hoping?

electricblue

@justbeingsomething Its complicated. I put TLR2 on hold because of all the plot holes in TLR. So I'm rewriting TLR and posting those chapters when I'm finished with them. I believe I have rewritten 5 chapters. But I completely understand that you're frustrated. If you'd like you can send me a message and we can talk about anything related to TLR.
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electricblue

Surprise! Chapter 5 for the rewritten version of The Locker Room is published. Five chapters done and ya know only a few to go. Just kidding there's lots more. 
          
          I'm just going to keep this short and say sorry that I haven't uploaded sooner. Please check it out and maybe even comment or vote. It helps a lot. Thanks again.

yunachan122

TLR 2 WHEN ARE U GOING TO COMPLETE IT???  

electricblue

@yunachan122 I can't say a date. To be honest, it's probably going to be a very long time. I want to edit The Locker Room, first. I was not very proud of what I put out when I was 14 (maybe 15). I'm proud that I finished something, but I feel like it could be waaaay better. Not only that, but there's many plot holes in it. So I want to edit it, and get everything straight first.
            
            If you want - feel free to private message me, and we can talk about TLR 2.
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