elektrik_sum

@joshc285 Thanks, I have literally just edited chapters three and four and I would love some feedback =)

Dragonborne

Wow! I love your stories! Could you please read Voice of the forest and tell me how to improve on it? It would mean a lot! and could you read my poems? they have very few reads, so could you tell me what is wrong with them? I need to improve on them... Can you give me advice?