elenaamador146

I felt that something was off about my sansxfrisk book so i added a chapter right after the sex scene. From Sans point of view. It felt a little too fast paced and i noticed i made a chapter where sans is suspicious of frisk killing papyrus but how did he know? Well i fixed it. Go back and read again.

elenaamador146

I love you guys. 
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WolfieWolf750

Lysssssaaaaaaaaa

WolfieWolf750

@WolfieWolf750 :b yea but it pulled up out of order
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elenaamador146

@WolfieWolf750 chi everything i have written has been the beginning. XP
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WolfieWolf750

@WolfieWolf750 never mind I just checked it fully and your beginning moved to the middle
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elenaamador146

I felt that something was off about my sansxfrisk book so i added a chapter right after the sex scene. From Sans point of view. It felt a little too fast paced and i noticed i made a chapter where sans is suspicious of frisk killing papyrus but how did he know? Well i fixed it. Go back and read again.

elenaamador146

I love you guys. 
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elenaamador146

So i write stories. Sure they dont have correct punctuation. It is fan fiction mostly. They are short. I am not trying to make them into novels. When things are shorter they tend to become more compact. Thanks for following me So far.