elfygirrl

@LisaGillisBooks it did! I discovered your books and immediately fell in love with Tristan, Marissa, and Jack! :) how was yours?

CreatingBalance_

hello, my name is brie and it's lovely to meet you. (: 
          i was just wondering if you could perhaps take a look at one of my stories? 
          i would greatly appreciate any feedback and would happily return the favour. 
          
          i was also wondering which one you think i should continue? i have four stories and it's getting a bit much continuing them all, you know? so if you have a particular favorite, it would be brilliant if you could help me out. :D 
          
          ▪ Carpe Diem 
          Ambrose is a Goddess, and Zeus' daughter. To help with her Goddess training, she had chosen to live among her people for a couple of weeks, or months at the most, but being a normal teenager is harder than she thought it would be; trouble is brewing beneath the Earth crust and Ambrose is in the middle of a war and remains to be the easy target. 
          
          ▪ The Revolution 
          Vampires are just a myth - right? Wrong. Ever since Edens sister has gone missing, her life has turned upside down, but will she survive when a legion of vampires threaten to destrong the human race? 
          
          ▪ Change of Fate 
          Maya and Eva are normal teeangers, or so they thought - they are half angel. A prophet has told that all three worlds - the realm of the living, hell and heaven - will be destroyed because of the neverending war between heaven and hell, but he has also predicted it is maya and eva that are the key to survival, but will they beat hells army? (made it to #11 on whats hot list) 
          
          ▪ Bitter Salvation 
          James, Emmeline, Sienna, Harry and Noelle are brothers and sisters with a dark secret; they are vampires, of sorts. In need to survive, they must drain humans of their life force, but these teeenagers respect life - they do not want to be monsters. They leave their home in order of a better life, but when their evil mother comes to drag them back, will everyone be safe?

TeaKJayT

Holaa ! ^ ^
          I was wondering
          If you had the time can you check out one of my stories?
          o:
          Please and Thankk Yuu ! <3
          Would mean soo muchhhh to us !
          :D
          Ouu
          They are called Wait WHAT? I'm Married To WHO!?!?!
          Anddd ! ^ ^
          I'm a 17 year old girl...And someones out to get me...
          Tell me wahh yu think ! ^ ^
          Ohh and maybe vote?
          Thankkk Yuu ! For your time !
          <3

Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if y o u could read one of my sto ri es and comment on it! (voti ng , f anning, and whatever ar e a ll o ptional, its the revi ews I nee d!) I'd love to retu rn the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything i s greatly appreciated! Thanks f o r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was j u st your typical Hawaii tra ns pl ant to Manhattan, obsess ive to p student who actually pro cras tinates everything, and b ound of Ivy; future care erist and c urrent fortune tel ler. U ntil-- that is--she fin ds out everyth ing she aced is more o r less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and strivin g socialit e--and hell o demons layer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--t hat is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome t o a world where elves,well, a re n 't your fairy tale elves. Ru le d in a ochlocracy, of O liga rch s and tech savvy mega­corpo rati ons, of underworld crimin al ru le, resistance in this m obocra cy is futile wh en your King ca n be your dish washer i n one da y. Intergala ctic best seller an d future O ligarch, K ronos fød t av Mø rke’skala soon finds out ho w his fickl e world migh t cha nge--with his help too. 
          
          Pride, Prestige, and The Undead--Okay, what can I say? If you're intersted in financially and/or politically powerful teens (but mostly not snobby) who go to and elite boarding school but find themselves slaying zombies instead, this is definitely the story for you! And there's the much less-used African myths and shamans involved :3 
          
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!

CreatingBalance_

Hello, my name is brie and it's lovely to meet you! ^^ 
          Anyway, if it isn't too much to ask, i would like to request that you take a look at one of my stories? 
          
          'Change of Fate' is at #15 on the What's Hot List, and im really eager to get it higher in ranking. (: 
          And 'The Revolution' is at #95, and it would be great to get that higher, too. 
          
          if you havn't got enough time, then it's fine; but i would appreciate all the comments/votes i can get! (:

serval

Hey, I know the­­­­­­­­se are super ann­oy­in­g,­ a­nd­ I­'m­ not gonna beg
          But I have this story called
          'An Albino On A­­­­­­­­ Reality Show.. ­Wh­at­ c­ould go wrong?'
          that I was hopi­­­­­­­­ng you could tak­e ­a ­lo­ok­ a­t ­an­d ­give­ my ­some feedback!
          Thanks, I know ­­­­­­­­these get annoying!
          (: