eliz_abethdrafts

Iam in deep trouble so my mom wants to read my story and I...am scared now 

leizhou593

Hi eliz I just wanted to say that your writing is actually really good but make sure to check for any spellings and missing words before you post the chapter. And if you are doing the next chapter (which i really hope) my advice for you to improve your writing is to first plan it, then you edited it then you can start writing the final chapter. I hope this will help you improve your writing.

eliz_abethdrafts

@leizhou593 thank you very much I appreciate it
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