eliza-sommers

oof, sorry you guys, apparently I didn't post the full version of chapter I, so it's up now if you only read the 81 word version. now it's 969 words, like I planned, sorry for that confusion.
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redvoution

Mind checking out my stories? No need to vote just honest opinion

eliza-sommers

@lovetop101 I was happy to help you out! Let me know if you need anything further on.
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redvoution

@eliza-sommers thank you! I know I still need to edit the book itself and it’s not perfect, but it took me some time to develop them and I wanted to make them have their own stories and like a human be imperfect and have flaws and have their problems and past
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eliza-sommers

@lovetop101 I read the first chapter of your ongoing story, “I’m in Love with My Gay Best Friend”, and I thought it had a good base. I did catch a few grammatical errors, but I loved your adjectives and descriptions. Although I noticed the story line was a bit cliché, I admire how quickly you were able to have your characters so diverse, whose presence left an imprint in my brain. I was wondering, though, how long did it take you to develop your characters? And why did you develop them so? 
            
            If you’d like to chat more about your book, I’d be happy to keep talking to you about it.
            
            eliza
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eliza-sommers

Ack, my apologies for the slow parts. I'm trying to get the hang of this, and I wanted to get the perception of the three siblings before I continued the story's plot, and interesting bits. Promise it will advance soon.
          
          ♥ eliza