CyanGoodgirl
Hi I started reading your henry cavill fan fiction. And I just thought you probably wanted some feedback or something like that.
When you write a fan fiction you probably would want to imagine yourself in the story while writing it. Because when Liz said she got a text saying her sister just died in a car accident you wouldn't just go continue the scene of a movie you'd immediately race home or something like that depending how close yall are. Ect.
But good job and keep up the good work
