maryaheduarda2011icl

Hi, how are you?? I wanted to give you an idea for the Jarah fanfic. ❤️ Why don't you try to make a sequence of episodes involving Val. Like, showing after they arrived home with her little brother, then try to show their routine with the new baby, her dealing with the fact that now she has to share her parents. Like that, then a sequence.

maryaheduarda2011icl

correct, thank you! I think if you add more chapters like this it will be even more popular! you rock❤️
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ellamadlyncilne_4

Hi love,
            Love that idea, I think maybe I have a couple of this in my chapters somewhere, but definitely adding it to my list ❤️
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barbarabandeiraa18

Hello! So you are my fav jarah writer, and I wanted to ask you a favor. I wrote a chapter for a one-shot book I created. Can you go and see if it's good? It's on my profile! 

ellamadlyncilne_4

Hey! I just finished reading your chapters and I really loved them! Your writing is so beautiful and you have such a lovely style. If I can give you a little tip, maybe try to make the storyline a bit clearer, since in a one-shot book the title and story should be easy to follow. Also, making the chapters a little longer could help the readers feel even more connected to your amazing ideas. You’re doing such a great job — keep writing, love u
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hsmtmtsWriterx

Hey Ella how are you doing we are so exited for the next chapter !
          

hsmtmtsWriterx

Tysm take your time luv and yes I hated that he died and left the show . and we don’t get no moments of him as a ghost  like I LOVED JJ it takes longer for me to write because of school so maybe next week I will pick back up because I have break on Monday-Friday next week for thanks giving
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ellamadlyncilne_4

Heyyy first of all i lovee your story, second of all i am working on that, im just super busy with school and stuff, and i have to say since I watched s4 im just so sad bc of jj’s death and its harder to write 
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