07GNewly2k18

hi dearヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ hope you dont mind, i just wanna reccomend are stories of this account☞ @RAxzus1 and hope you will give it a try, just at least visit one of her stories and it's really appreciatedฅ(๑*▽*๑)ฅ!!
          
          Title: Revenge in a way of Seduction
          Genre: Romance
          Link: www.wattpad.com/story/149852335
          
          
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          Title: My Possessive Stranger
          Genre: *Comedy*Romance
          Status: Complete
          
          
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          Title: The Mask
          Genre: *Thriller*Romance

winterbear02

Please support me with My story. Have some time to read. Votes and Comments are highly appreciated. —
          https://my.w.tt/hvfPmJZSAM

winterbear02

Thanks
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ellevating

"Please..." kasi parang nakakasira for me lang naman po. Tapos yung all caps pag nagugulat or sigaw. Lagyan nyo nalang po ng dugtong na description kung paano nasabi ng character yung sentence and isang exclamation mark lang po. Lagyan nyo din po sana ng more details yung expression kung paano nasasabi ng character yung sentence nga po ulit. Tapos dun po tayo sa di masyadong cliche side, im not saying na cliche ang story nyo po kasi inspired naman po ng alsb i understand. Parang lagyan nyo po ng twist i dunno how to explain kasi eh hehe. And lastly, always proofread. Hihi. 
            
            Yun lang naman po. Sana maapreciate nyo yung masasabi ko. Ipagpatuloy nyo po yung pagsusulat nyo ng stories.
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ellevating

@mistynathy Hello! Nabasa ko yung story, maganda po yung plot nya and the way you write. Sorry po if masyado akong critical ehehe pero ang di ko lang po gusto is grammatical errors ng very very slight. Tapos po wag po sana kayo magdadami ng dots, example po yung "
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