ellielliecarter

Hey guys!
          	Chapter 5 is out. Please leave feedback (if anyone reads this lmao)

ellielliecarter

CHAPTER 3 IS OUT!!!!!! Please tell me what you thought of it. Feedback is always appreciated! And stay tuned for chapter 4 THIS WEEKEND. That's the  "shxt will go down" chapter. Hope you like it!

xyliacrystalle

hi how often will u update
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ellielliecarter

Btw it's the re-edited chapter 4 from before, so I am going to change it up a bit so it fits the story more fyi.
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ellielliecarter

OKAY UPDATE. SO YOU MAY HAVE NOTICED THAT I REMOVED MY (only 5)CHAPTERS. I AM REDOING THEM. BECAUSE I DONT LIKE THEM. THEY'RE BORING. IT'S NOT GOING ANYWHERE. I NEED IT TO BE A GRIPPING STORY. AND I CHANGED AMARA'S PERSONALITY A BIT SO SHE'S MORE INTERESTING. I AM TAKING THIS SERIOUSLY. 
          
          Anyway I think you're going to like this more, I studied ☝️ how to end chapters and write a good story. That's why it took me so long. I STARTED IN AUGUST GOD DAMNIT. IT'S FEBRUARY. THIS IS EMBARASSING. Okay. Chill. I realized I'm not good at writing all the backstory stuff much and I'm better and just writing dialogue so I will be focusing more on that instead, I hope it will be more fast-paced instead of the blah blah stuff no one cares about, and therefore more interesting. Hopefully. 
          
          I GOT THIS.
          
          

ellielliecarter

Also, I decided i'm going to be re-doing the first 2 chapters because I feel like it's slow and needs a better hook, otherwise people will not actually read it . So yeah. I'm so busy though it's insane but it's my dream to finish this book SO I WILL. It will take time though I'm sorry 

ellielliecarter

Okay can someone explain to me why there are stories emerging with the exact same name as mine. At first back in august the day after i posted mine someone posted one with the exact same name, and now in January TWO other ones emerged with the name Stay Where I Can See You. Like— I dont think that's a coincidence. The name of my book is literally related to what the book is about: Insecurity, clinginess, basically Archer telling Amara to stay where he can see her. Now that I think about it I don't think I've posted those parts yet my bad. But like what is going on. All of them have like 2 chapters. Like are these bots? What is going on...

ellielliecarter

And like my book isn't even popular. It has only 91 views like please . It has been in the ranking though so maybe that's why? I don't know. But I hate this 
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ellielliecarter

I need to start posting  I need to update................ I've written like half of chapter 5 but I'm stuck guys cuz I need it to make sense later in the story cuz I have it all planned out but I can't write this damn chapter help meeeee 

ellielliecarter

Anyway I love my new profile pic
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