elliotlane

My story is still a work in progress, and I feel like I’m living inside it a little at the moment… going back, rewriting chapters, adding things, pulling pieces apart and putting them back together again.
          	
          	I keep second guessing myself, changing things that probably don’t need changing, but it matters to me. This one sits deep!!
          	
          	I’d really love some feedback… the honest kind. The good, the bad, the uncomfortable. I can take it.

nicoleta779

@elliotlane your story is very good  
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elliotlane

My story is still a work in progress, and I feel like I’m living inside it a little at the moment… going back, rewriting chapters, adding things, pulling pieces apart and putting them back together again.
          
          I keep second guessing myself, changing things that probably don’t need changing, but it matters to me. This one sits deep!!
          
          I’d really love some feedback… the honest kind. The good, the bad, the uncomfortable. I can take it.

nicoleta779

@elliotlane your story is very good  
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