TheeReina

Hiiiii
          
          So I have been trying to respond in the comment but Wattpad is acting up so I thought to share my response here.
          But I'll be deleting immediately you confirm that you've seen it here(cause I don't want that here on your page)
          
          So this is my response to your question in the comment section:
          
          Firstly, thank you so much for responding and not taking this the wrong way. Thank you.
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          ‎I get what you mean about that(and I can't wait for how the plot is going to unveil and let us know why that happened and how Clara will feel about it, cause if I was her, I would think he didn't like me but only does because of the access he has to my mind, lol, but THAT'S JUST ME as an individual)
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          ‎For the question, it has actually been very formal all through the story. It was this chapter that I just gained the courage to share that feedback cause, all along the story, I wanted to see how it would play out.
          ‎Also, in my opinion, I felt like the whole book (until some chapters ago I believe,) have had a structured and a likkle rigid flow(what I mean here is that, the formalness of the monologue and conversations  didn't really flow into themselves and that made it have this abrupt feel of moving into the next action)
          ‎But it started becoming seamless and flowing really well as it progressed in the chapters and it was this formal monologue in this chapter that broke that flow and that's why I thought to share a feedback.

TheeReina

@TheeReina Thank you so much for responding.
            I am really excited for the plot. I can feel it already.
            
            Thank you for being kind with your response.
            Thank youuuu❤️❤️❤️
            
            (Can I go ahead to delete it?)
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elowen-22

@TheeReina Thank you so much for being so thoughtful and gentle with your feedback! I really appreciate how much you care about this story. 
            I’ll share a little sneak peek of my plans with you . There will be a big twist to the mind-reading ability in later chapters. The whole point of this plot change is to push Kian to set aside her inner thoughts and truly get to know the real Clara from the bottom of her heart ❤️
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TheeReina

@TheeReina ‎I hope this doesn't affect your confidence or anything(because that is totally not the plan) nor make you feel bad.
            ‎I really love the story and the plot and I want it to gain more reads because it's actually nice and that's why I thought to speak out.
            ‎I apologize once again if this sounds rude or makes you feel like I am saying that the book is badly written (please and please, that's not it at all).
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            ‎Thank you once again for responding and I hope to read much more books from you.
            
            PS: I am really scared to post this because I don't want you to think or feel like maybe the book is badly written because that truly isn't what I mean.
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