TylerBaker623
First off I love your Harry Potter fanfic but to me it's just a little confusing for Harry to submit to Tom to me either posed to be equal so even if Tom tried to go against him or try to force him into the meeting I just kind of feel like Harry should know before he even went back then to protect himself from Tom but everything else I like the sex scene was not bad in my opinion it shouldn't be too explicit for readers but I will also sell you that I think it's really ingenious for him not to just be able to summon death there should be his own entity but I also think that in his most time death will probably show up here is some ideas that I've always thought that were unspeakable in Harry Potter I think it would be really cool for Harry Potter to go back in time and be the master did but basically he's helping out muggle-borns during the time of Grindelwald he's setting up safe points for them to be saved from Grundy Vol 2 Men basically muggle-borns would pretty much be Untouchable because of Harry there'd be safe houses I think it'd be really cool for the fidelius charm to be used because only Harry would know where it's at I mean unless he's killed which he can't be because he's the master of death also Harry takes time out of the orphanage and trust him to be a good person and a romantic relationship starts to form also macusa trying to find out who he is because I can't seem to catch him or find him even when they're saving the orders or muggle-borns
