emeraldwaffles

Sorry for the late reply, but i think you are good too! :D:D
          	You should continue.. (:

ladykd98

HEY, I WANT YOU TO CHECK OUT OUR... YEP ITS CO-WRITTEN, STORY! 
          
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          please, fan me if you think we have promise. i would read your storys... 
          if i like the first chapter, but only if you COMMENT on myne. thanks so much! 
          
          I was wondering if, maybe, in your spare time you could read our (mine and AliceAlaine's) story called st.mori's academy.... its about this girl named Victoria (shes a teenage vampire who like all other vampires can wield elemental magic, and is going to a vampire & 1/2 vampire [damphire] high school in Bela Bela [near Bela Coola], British Columbia) and some very weird and VERY dangerous things start happening involving black magic and an army of evil magicians when, after a suspicious tragedy kills B.C.'s Vampire Premier (the only vampire with political power in the country, aside from vampire mayors of a few small municipalities) and its up to Victoria and her friends to save, not only their friend, and their school but also the country from an army of 'dark' magicians.
          
          please read my story and if you like things that are the opposite, but the same as twilight go to this link and read the story, itis updated daily.
          
          It is called 'More Than You Know' by AliceAlaine here's the link :
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/503006-more-than-you-know 
          
          she and i would really be thankful (and would return the favour if you want us to) if you were to read our stories. :) 
          
          thank you. 
          
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          -Ladykd98

EdenLee

HI HI GRACE!!!!!
          
          I'm Orianthi!
          
          Guess what? I'm writing a story titled "A White Arachnea". Wanna sneak peek? Here it goes: Arachne, a schizophrenic and epileptic albino woman, faces a struggle between love and death in an unnamed asylum. She is terribly in love with her pet tarantulas and a man named Ethan. During her quest for a normal life, she uncovers new wonders and horrible mysteries.
          Want to find out more? Check it out at:
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/482834-a-white-arachnea
          
          Muchas Gracias Chica!

Peckinpah

Hey there. I've got a nice thriller called "Wolf of the black Moon"  that I hope you find the time to read. Its got werewolves and vampires as main characters but I assure you It's not one bit cliche. The plot is ever twisting and intense. Why don't you find out for yourself and tell me what you think? till then.

Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle