stargazer0966

Hey! Do you mind checking out my new story My Suicidal Friday? I'd love some feedback! :D Thank you! 
          
          Amberlin's parents are always fighting. Every time they are, she runs away, trying to find that safe haven that we all have. 
          
          But as she does, she meets him...Colton. She falls for him, hard. But she can't help herself. It's odd how he sort of plays with her mind, and how she trusts his family so easily, so quickly. Too quickly to be real. 
          
          Something is definitely different about Colton. And she really notices it, when he burns her when many people are around and that he's cold when it's just the two of them. She can't seem to stop falling for him, no matter how unrealistic it or he is. 
          
          But it's not all fun and games. Especially when she goes back to her mom, and she gets kicked out. Then news about her dad leaves her heart broken, even if Colton is there. 
          
          Every time her mom and her try to make up, something gets in the way, and nothing is sane any more. Even if she realizes that she doesn't live in the real world anymore. She lives in Colton's... 
          
          ~Ash~

rachelini

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          hehhe im the first to write on ur page :P hhaha glad to talk to a canadian :) ive always liked Canada. Everyone i know that has been told me its kinda just like here in Aus. have you been to Aus yet? i havnt been to Canada, but i think i might be going nxt year :D
          even tho our story (crossing paths) says that we all wrote it, we didnt really, mostly xenni (sydney-sapphire) writes it and the rest of us just like proof read and add more exciting twists. but im really glad you liked it with our 4 minds alike!
          
          yeh that story you suggested was great! its detailed and written in great depth. i got a bit freaked in the begining cause i was like 'woahh watcha talkin bout that makes you say i didnt warn you :/' I must catch up on the rest of her stories soon too!
          Hope you can follow on and read the rest of our story!
          xx