Crisisprone

Why did you stop just when we were one the edge of our seats its not really fair i was all into it and then i went for the next chapter and all i see is you are at the end of this story i absolutely hate when authers do that and then wait like a whole month to a year to ipdate or say that they cant write good enough it just makes me want to brake something.

JxnQxan

Why don't you continue?
          When I read your prologue of the story, I was amazed at how amazing it was written. 
          The storyline was just great.
          But you still need improvement on your sentence structure and grammar.
          I'm just advising you so don't get mad at me.

emily_chunti

It's amazing advice thank you
Balas