escape-reality94
Since you asked for some feed back on your Tom Hardy story here it is.
I thinkits a good going story. I feel like there are some important pieces missing like who she is, what lead to her needing to change her apperence, etc. also I dont recall ( could've looked over it or over read it) but I didnt see where she tells him her name yet he knows.
but its a good story
emilywrites_
Thank you for reading and for your feedback! I think you’re actually right, cheers for pointing that out :)