@emmakatelyn8
This was a lot longer than I expected it would be (this will be in 2 parts, but the series deserves it and much more than I can over, so anyway here it is…
This has got to be the best, most greatest, spectacular Jalph/LOTF Fanfic I have ever read.
The plot was an up and down experience, the emotions high and felt like loops on a roller coaster, (I felt the characters emotions in my heart, being and soul). Your writing is absolutely beautiful, and incredible, you truly brought the characters to life, (at points I felt they were real people that I knew-crazy) that’s how good you’ve written the characters, and their personalities, it’s truly impressive!
This story made me feel like I was on a never ending roller coaster. The storyline was so put together, with the time differences, dates, the way everything was worded, and that every character had their own story and moment to shine✨. All the characters were amazingly put into the story and as individuals, Jeffery and Laurie and their care for Ralph, Jack and Paige is so heartwarming, they’re such great parents and people! They help the boys recover from the island, make a safe place for Jack and even Paige at time, help her get custody of Jack through out the trial, and always support these three whenever they’ve needed. That’s a beautiful, and pure thing to do. I love them.
Paige always being the older sibling, making sure to be there for Jack and looking out for him. And finally getting official custody of Jack in the end of the trial made me so happy, both of them deserved so much better. Paige has always been apart of her brothers life, whether or not she now’s the full story, she always by Jack no matter what, it shows how she’ll always love her brother forever and nothing could change it. I love it!