Hi! I'm not trying to be professional writer here or something like that but I just want to give you an advice. Disclaimer, hindi ako prof writer alright? Hindi padin ganun karami ang reads ng books ko at followers but I'm doing these things para mapalawak pa ang books ko.
#1: Try to arrange your chapters. Like, bigyan mo ng numbers ang mga chapters then title. (Kung gusto mo lang naman of course.)
#2: Make your writings clear. Hindi kita binabash dito ah but I'm just saying what I saw while scrolling on your story. Try mong wag gawing mahahaba ang mga paragraph ng chap mo. At tsaka, bawasan mo din masyado ang mga emoji, italics and bold letters. Medyo nakaka-gulo kasi sa writings. But all in all, maganda ang chaps mo.
#3: You have a good book cover, so was your blurb. That was good too. But try to put the title on the picture. If ayaw mo dahil nahihirapan ka then it's solely okay.
#4: Try to recommend your story. Like, magpunta ka sa profiles ng mga sikat na gxg author, puntahan mo ang mga nagfo-follow sa kanila then recommend your stories. Nire-recommend ko yung mga authors na nagsusulat din ng mga kaye cal fanfictions. I'm sure may makukuha kang readers or followers dun.
#5: I also like the pictures. Wala akong masabi dun. But try to make it less. Hindi kasi lahat ng readers ay may signal wifi or data para ma-open ito. Para din naman hindi sila ma-pressure.
Lastly, continue to write. If ur planning to still write then that's good. I just hope that my advices will gonna help you.
Don't worry, kung gusto mo talagang maging sikat na writer then hindi yun malayong mangyari kung hindi ka titigil. Wala namang nangangarap ang nagsisimula sa sarap. Dapat paghihirap din muna hahaha.
Alright now, I'm sorry for disturbing you. I just really want to say this. You're an aspiring writer and I'll cheer for you all the way. Good evening and good luck!
