emozayn

@efarley25 that sounds so awesome, I can't wait :) I'm really eager to read your story, I've become somewhat emotionally attached to it, I'm not exactly sure why. And, as I already told you, your great writing skills help it too :)

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that was actually really helpful.. i feel like the story started strong but its getting worse so yeah *TEASER ALERT* they will probably have financial issues and louis' past will dome back to haunt them and there may be a bit of bloodshed ;)

emozayn

@efarley25 I'm not very creative and I'm a better reader than a writer. But anyway, I don't think I want Eliza and Louis to have problems on the escaping part itself, but on the after-escaping stage. I mean, you're talking about orphans who, at least I imagine, have spent the majority of their lifes on the Anchorage. So I guess that's their main problem: the total lack of knowledge of what it is like to live in the real world. So here's some questions: Do they have any money (if they're escaping there is no heritage)? Any unknown family members? Will they buy a house right after escaping? Will they have to create a new identity so they're not found? Will all of these problems create issues on their relationship?
          
          I hope I helped you, even if just one little bit. I just want you to know that you should keep writing imprisoned unless you are not very pleased with the plot. I'm here if you need anything. I wish you all the best :)