I've been enjoying your poetry. I don't have a great understanding of the poetic terms, so I tend not to comment on a lot of poems. But you were recommended by someone I find to be a good ear for poetry, and...she was right. What I enjoy about your poetry is the content. It's original, creative, and, honestly, a breath of fresh air. You write in your own way, and I appreciate that in a writer.
Keep it up!