hey girl, I'm about 1/3 of the way into blood bound and it's pretty good! some constructive criticism would be for the paragraphs to be a little shorter and less chunky. it would really make the chapters flow a lot better. other than that, great work! <3<3<3
Hi!! Thank you! I am actually working on a new story now I’ll be posting the first few chapters in a little bit so be sure to keep an eye out! Thanks for your support