neva17211
Hey! I read your story. I'd just like to tell you that while your storyline is very good, the way you write it is not that good. I mean that just as an opinion and you are welcome to ignore me.
If you want me to elaborate just leave a message on my profile. I think I know the reason why you like my story better than your own.
P.S. What's your age? Coz I am pretty young too.
