daughter_of_apollo

Holy crap I checked my story and I have 328 reads and 27 favorites 
          
          I never thought it would become that I just wrote those silly stories cause I was bored 
          
          Thank u guys so much
          
          Also how did you find me and start following me I love your guys stories btw 
          
          Should I post more on my story??
          
          (Did the Ithaca saga break anyone else) 

Hey thank you for Following, if you ever get a chance I released my first novel recently (Violet Eclipse), I'm currently looking for feedback on this first arc and hope that you and I can become friends as I continue to familiarize myself with this landscape.
          
          Adversely if you have anything to direct me too as far as your own work I'd be happy to take a look.
          
          have an awesome day!

Ok I have eleven followers 
          
          I was wondering how many of you have read my story cause I reread it and I thought it was cringy but I wanna know what you guys think 

Ok I have been wondering how you say Pipers last name
          
          McLean 
          
          Cause I say muh-clan 
          
          but I have heard people say muh -clean 
          Also mc-lean 
          
          So how do you say it?????

My best friend is watching the series and just getting into Percy Jackson and my favorite thing is watching her fall for Luke we have arguments daily about Luke being a.bad person or not and we fangirl over Percy and annabeth

@emz20124 yeah, it’s totally fine. Even if you do not wanna share it’s fine. I just wanted to show you an example 

@emz20124 just drop it this conversation.

@emz20124 you are most welcome. Also, I just wanted to say that I didn't mean you share a new script with me. I meant that you share a script of one of your already published one-shot with me. That way you would have no risk as you already have a copyright over it. I can rewrite it and if you like it you can republish that one-shot.

About the fanfiction, here are some pointers:
          1. Try leaving space between paragraphs. Your fanfiction looks too cluttered.
          2. Use capital letters when referring to a person's name.
          3. Try to make paragraphs shorter and usually use a new line for dialogues.
          4. Use Bold when you are making a time skip or line break or when you are writing author's note or when writing Percy POV or Annabeth POV or something like that which isn't related to the main content.
          5. Focus on grammar.
          6. Instead of Percabeth, write Percy and Annabeth. 
          7. Use punctuations.
          8. When writing the chapter name, keep the first letter of each word capital.
          
          All in all, I think you should focus on aesthetics as it is a very important part. If you allow me I can show you what I mean. Just share the script of any oneshot with on my profile. I'll rewrite it and send it back to you. I swear I won't use it in my fanfiction.

@emz20124 That’s so cool. I'm 13.