enchantedmagickoala1
Sorry guys, feeling really unwell this weekend, so no update this week~
enchantedmagickoala1
shreyaaashree
Hey! I just published my poetry book few days back. I am looking forward to some recognition and support. If you don't mind will you please check out my book? I'll be really thankful to you for your feedback. :)
https://my.w.tt/N9l7BTQjZX
enchantedmagickoala1
@shaidyngrey No problem! As a new author, I totally understand you! Getting feedback is pretty rare, so I know how much constructive feedback means to you :D
shreyaaashree
@shaidyngrey Thanks for all the constructive criticism! I'll make sure to review your points. You don't know how much your efforts help and encourage me :)
enchantedmagickoala1
@shaidyngrey I just finished reading your book, and I'm not that good at poetry, so please don't feel offended by any of my comments. Firstly, this story, unlike other poems, has a clear plot and a strong theme of love. Also, I like how your writing style changes to the emotion of the protagonist, even though I do find some paragraphs a little tiring to read due to the lack of commas. Hope this helps :)
Yoloions
HI! Could you by any chance check out https://www.wattpad.com/story/174819772-the-ancients You can vote and/or comment if you'd like to! Hoping for feedbacks from you for the author! (She'd appreciate a follow tooooo) PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
enchantedmagickoala1
@Yoloions I finished reading the book. The background of the story is quite creative and is well edited. Apart from that one missing full stop from the second part of the story (I'll point it out for the author), the grammar is spot on. However, the first two parts of the story are mainly a montage as the author 'tells' the context instead of 'showing' the context. I hope to see more descriptions and actions instead of more montages (because the reader would become bored easily) in the future, but for now, it's off to a great start! Hope this helps!
enchantedmagickoala1
Some of you may notice that I tagged you in some award entries. I have decided to enter some competitions to gain recognition for my story as well as experience :D
enchantedmagickoala1
Nah, they don't. Otherwise, I wouldn't even be able to enter them in the first place!
Saturnine___
@enchantedmagickoala1 Good luck then! But I have a stupid question xD should the stories be finished?