EMR_Was_Here
Okay I'll get right on it
EMR_Was_Here
Welcome to Wattpad. @UsDesperatesNeedSmut sent me on over here. One small suggestion for your story, I think it just needs to be a little more descriptive and longer. I'm just saying this because when you have numerous short chapters they just pile up and take longer to get to the point.
endlessly_nameless
@EMR_Was_Here hi again, ive published the first chapter of my new story. if you want to check it out and let me know if you found it more detailed
EMR_Was_Here
Okay can't wait you definitely have the talent
endlessly_nameless
@EMR_Was_Here im sorry for the long reply, but i completely understand your feedback. i mean for my book to be presented like this, but within the next few chapters the point will definitely come through. im starting to plan another story, with longer chapters, so hopefully when i come to publishing that it will be more descriptive for you.