If you have time could you check out my story, I would really be greateful. It's my first one, and its not finished yet but feedback is always appreciated.
Here is a link just in case you have the time to read it:
http://www.wattpad.com/368564-chapter-1-him
Thanks for your time :)
Hii (K)
I was just wondering if you could please check out my story - In the World of Women. I've just started out and this is my first attempt so I'd be extremely grateful for any feedback at all.
Thanks ;)
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