just gonna post it here, because if i kept it in i'm sure i'm going to back out of this again. i've changed "conflicted" A LOT and now it's looking scary to me.
the timeline and destination aren't the only thing changed. i'm taking irha out of the equation of pakistanis problems: terrorism etc because i feel like she's too foreign for matters that are too close to my own heart. to truly understand these problems, you have HAVE to live here and still love something with all the imperfections.
the theme is same, but the plot is changed. i really hope you guys appreciate and accept all these changes. that being said, i hope to complete this novel(la) in this year.