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first time asking wattpad support for help kinda nervy..

Ayumu_Angel

Little advice, as you write, your paragraphs are so long and detailed, it’s so awesome to see it! Most fanfics I see nowadays aren’t written this way; it’s actually so refreshing. 
          
          But since they’re so long, some readers might find it hard to keep engaged. Because of this, I recommend leaving a space after a character “thinks” or “says” something. For example: “You think so?” Haruhi says, looking up from her book. Space! 
          
          And then details for a monologue and a few spaces between things when a different thought drifts in. I was reading your chapter, and it was a little overwhelming! Of course, unless it’s the writing style itself. Just advice, no need to take it to heart… can’t wait to read each other's books :drooling emoji:

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@Ayumu_Angel aaa thank you for the advice !! I'm not used to the page sizes on Wattpad, so I can see why the paragraphs seem long. I just copied and pasted from my Google Doc when cross-posting everywhere, lmao. This is definitely something I didn't take into consideration, so thank you for pointing it out :DD
            
            Also, I'm super excited for your fic !! Good luck to us both (˶˃ ᵕ ˂˶)
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