ScarlettBlackDaisy

Hey! Thank you so much for reading "Him" ^_^ really hope you like it and don't hesitate to share your views ❤️

ScarlettBlackDaisy

@enured 
            
            Thank you for the compliment and it's perfectly okay. Yes, Hayden is definitely a complex person. I'm sorry you didn't finish the story because book III is truly worth all the pain of the preceding books. If you ever do continue, I hope you like it. Otherwise thank you for giving it a chance :) ❤️
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enured

@ScarlettBlackDaisy No need to thank me, it was a catchy one, after all. It's just sad that the book is based on a true story because Hayden is honestly one of the most toxic personalities I've ever read of. I couldn't stand reading the entire book (I'm sorry) because of Hayden's sorry excuse of a personality. I know people have issues but i would do better by not frying my own brain with the frustration others have to suffer. I have to admit, though, that the way you captured and structured Hayden is honestly admirable; I'm certain it would've been an awfully challengening feat to get into his head and to portray Helena's determination despite it all.
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enured

@toxicsunss Um, okay. I did go through it, until the third chapter. I can see the spark there - the passion and the urge to produce something unique and it is commendable. However, two factors were slightly off-off-putting. First, the minor grammatical errors. Second, the cliche nature of the story. I see potential though, and it would be a most atrocious deed to not encourage it.