Hi! Saw your post in the Improve Your Writing thread, and you mentioned that you're looking for longer critiques and feedback. One of the best ways to get that is through book clubs. The quality of feedback often varies based on how experienced the writer is, but sometime you get really helpful critiques. If you're interested, I think your work would be a good fit for the Pirate's Pub book club. It's fantasy focused, with tons of stories featuring LGBT+ characters. Link if you're interested: https://www.wattpad.com/story/116654412-the-pirates%27-pub-book-club
I'm also happy to check out the first few chapters of your work and share my impression of it. Is there one story in particular that you'd like feedback on?