Do not care about other opinion or commenting too much. You cannot pleas everyone. The only thing i want you to know if I became your reader because I love how you put your mind, soul into writing. You got the spirit, you standing in what you believing is good. Not most writer can’t write the slow burn with partner grieving so beautifully like you, most of them will change the storyline according to reader preference. But I love how u are standing in your line and keep it beautifully organize and happy. Please be happy and keep your originality. I will keep supporting you.