hey everyone, so ive mentioned a few times, that i DO appreciate constructive criticism, however, youll also know that ive said numerous times that when i post a new story or update chapters, i basically use them as drafts and rewrite/edit or completly erase chapters as i go, to fit the story better. i usually write my chapters early in the morning (at 1-3 am) and actually post it later. when i write about anxiety, depression, etc, im not blind to any thing that happens in those situations, ive been through it. please be nice when commenting. my stories all go through public drafting so you can comment and tell me which you think i should fix,change, or erase, so it makes it better for you all as well as anyone else who reads it.