Eria Rahman

Thanks sounds awesome!!

@etomasta 
            Hello, I'm sorry for getting this back to you so late, but here is my feedback; it's good. It really is, but I feel like the whole story is a bit rushed. Try to add more details and you'll have a wonderful book.

@Pixiett  Hey, sorry for the late reply! Its a good story so far, but there's a bit you can edit if you want to.  You should try to add for details about how the character currently feels, instead of what she felt before. This creates a connection between the reader and the protagonist. Good luck on "What Lurks in The Shadows" and "Innocent"!

@BookLover13129867  Hey! Sorry for replying so late, but I suppose it's better late then never. :P Anyways, I was reading your book and one thing truly stuck out: Everything was so rushed! Your story's good and all, but I believe that it can become GREAT if you took a bit more time and added more details. Good luck!

@grey_mcknight 
            You're very talented! :)

@shizu_31 
            You're a good writer! I do have one complain though. Just a tiny one. In your book, The Bad Boy's Sister, the protagonist seems to call her brother so formally that it's a bit redundant. On the other hand, if the book took place around the 14th century, it would've made sense but seeing "let it go" made me realize it's a 21st century based book. Otherwise that, good job and continue on! :)

@GeorgiaWaghorn Sorry if I made you feel bad, but I only criticize those who wish for help. Constructive criticism should be used to get better at writing, not to hurt someone's feelings.