erikagomez22

@Achelois  thank you! And will do! I'm going to add more and I will keep your advice in mind. 

Your story is off to a great start. My advice though, add more detail, more of a background story always helps. Also, just double check punctuation and capitalization before you post. I get grammar Nazis all the time... gets annoying, so just trying to save you from that (:
          
          other than that, keep up the work! Happy Writing!