esiuool

She's got a point, she's an icon, she's a legend and she is the moment.
          	
          	Im back and I’m 18 august 3rd bitches!

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3

esiuool

Of course! I loved reading knowing Xavier and its probably easily top 50 books on this app. I appreciate you coming to my page and commenting. As for feedback I don’t really have much the book was great, however I do feel like the book would’ve really tore me apart had Xavier died. I LOVED the entire thing but the end felt done before to me. I think sad books just have more of a lasting impact and while everyone loves a good happily ever after I feel as though the book could’ve benefited from him dying. Again obviously I am not a writing and this is just a reader’s opinion, and i appreciate you not breaking my heart. Everything else was great though,  many people may find her dad to be a little unrealistic in parenting but my parents are actually just like him. They actually let my sisters boyfriend live with them many years ago because of abuse. I liked how the beginning seemed like another cliche but really does a 180 on you and I like that the mc is not perfect when making decisions. Anyways as I’ve stated previously amazing book and I look forward to seeing what you write next. ♥️
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EvelynHail

Hello, and welcome to Wattpad! 
          
          Thank you so much for adding  “Mind the Gap” to your reading list! ❣️
          
          I hope you will enjoy Evan and Iris' adventures ☺️! You will love the book if you are a fan of slow burn peculiar romance in an unusual train setting! 
          
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          Cheers, and have a wonderful day!
          
          Evelyn and Rainer

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️