Hello,
So I co judged your story, and to tell you the truth I COULDN'T follow I didn't like it. I usually don't read about a animal as the main POV, But I' Id like to say I am sorry, Because if you have read frakkevins reveiw on that storry I was obviously mean; I came off the wrong way, Your plot was a 5, Grammar was a 3 and page turner a 1, I found it boring, But I kept reading which is A good thing in the end the story didn't hook me, But I would like to say that its a good story for a beginner, good luck with it :) and if I sond mean. uhm sorrry once again I don't mean it It must be m jealous side showing because I truthfully/slightly enjpoyed it.. I just telling the truth.. damn it.. Srryy VOTED. by tte way I dont know whether or ot yor a beginner so dont take that the wrong way either. good luck!