etfreeman

New Chapter of SEEN! Also for anyone who has already read Chapters 1-5 i have gone back and switched them to 1st person POV if you want to go back and reread those.
          	
          	Happy Holidays!

etfreeman

Nothing like going back over everything you've already written in a story ....to rewrite it in 1st person from 3rd person AND present tense from past tense. 3 out of 9 chapters done... SEEN will be reposted once all the current chapters are edited.
          
          Comments are always helpful and welcomed!

etfreeman

@etfreeman yea! Which one did you order?!
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MarieMiria

Looking forward to it!
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MarieMiria

Thank you for your votes on Hurting You,Loving You ❤️❤️

MarieMiria

@etfreeman  Amazon just shipped the book!
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MarieMiria

@etfreeman I think it’s a great move to switch especially mental health- in one of my books the heroine Rowan I struggling with mental health and I found it was very helpful to paint a more clear picture- it always feels like you directly in their head ( sounds little weird ahaha ) but we hear the thoughts and feelings first hand!  I love 1st person - can’t wait.
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etfreeman

@MarieMiria I am currently switching it to 1st person. It's such an annoying process but I think it will help A LOT! I want this story to be more about Camilla’s mental health journey and the romance is a bonus. And I'm trying to keep this one pg-13 lol maybe
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etfreeman

Sorry I have been quiet on here for too long. I've just been struggling to write...anything. I get a new idea and start planning out the story and then bam writer's block! So I work on another story and skip around until some inspiration comes. I have published on Amazon a couple of my stories! But it's the unfinished ones that keep me up at night. I'm doing my best to get something written down. Something is always better than nothing. Can't edit an empty page. I feel like a need my own cheer squad some days to keep me from giving up...

etfreeman

I know it has been a while since I posted... anything. I have been lacking the time and will to write. It all just keeps doing laps in my head but haven't been able to get it out. I got a little typed out today. So in honor of that I posted the next two chapters in Life's Rundown! Please check it out and let me know what you think!! Comments and likes always feed the drive to write more!

etfreeman

So I temporarily removed His Forbidden Sweets because it is officially published on Amazon!!! I thought about leaving the first few chapters to grab attention that could lead to people buying...but as a reading on her I truly dislike when people so that. I'm on here for free reads. I expect them to be rough drafts or first time writers, etc. I want to leave comments in hopes of correcting or inspiring people to keep going. 
          So as my stories are shared and edited they will in time move on to be published and removed from here. I do plan to give more advanced notice so anyone reading it will be able to finish before I remove it.
          
          As of now I have TWO stories published! And I couldn't be happier!!

etfreeman

Sorry I haven't been posting lately. 1. I work in a school so I am back to busy work day, kids homework, sports, and then me time if I can stay awake long enough to write anything. 2. I went through some mental health stuff early this year but finally got back on track!! 3. I got really discouraged when WATTPAD removed Unforeseen Attraction....I am sorry to anyone who was reading it or wants to read it now. But it did push me to take the next step and work on it, editing and revising it. I also started reaching out to publishers for it. 4. My newest work I have slowed down on because of all of the above reasons. I also did a read through and changed some things so it will be reposted in time.

SMMarieAuthor

@etfreeman Me being nosy <3 because you read through my draft xD And I was gonna follow you. Don't feel discouraged. Wattpad should have sent you an email or message on why it was removed if they didn't it could have been 'banned content' I used to be an ambassador and remember most of it. I used to have to go find it.
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