MinzJ

Can you please read my first bts story and tell me how to improve I would really appreciate. 

Hey there! ✧(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
          
          So..this is about my book. Guys please help me a little it's hard to choose... My books cover that i made but i can't bring myself to choose one hehe. 
          
          And guys imma cry!! Please read my book and tell me about my writing so i acn improve it! 
          I know very well that you might be busy but can u please take 5 minuets to read it? I'll appreciate that much more than any vote. 
          
          Thanks you for reading this!! 
          I'll make sure to write books that will keep you entertained
          

Hlo

Thanks for your vote in Authentic Cafe !
          Hope you enjoy reading it till the end~♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

Hope u enjoy reading Illusion 
          
          o(〃＾▽＾〃)o

https://www.wattpad.com/story/302331331?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=bossasai&wp_originator=KPCNzSSf0PV5GioQPYc2AHqKAWtTfpyF2GB7swZi9UnPzrReo08nAJw67R2nK0ZiFnbS4EVwA1amcO3rdZtYyascJaD5M22Jt9TB5BXYt34zmQcpxyqhKFEQA72L1q8I
          
          Just vote pls

hey would u mind checking our works?