euphoric_bibliophile

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Honestly, I didnt attack you or whatever you call it. I simply critiqued your story. As you may or may not know, I am a former beta reader. I look our for mistakes and see the progress in the story, character and plot wise. I gave you constructive criticism and you accused me of being judgmental?
          	
          	Oh and if you didn't "copy" my friend's story, then why did you mute me? Only guilty people do that. Also, why did you assume that it was you I was talking about? Lol. You seemed so affected and pissed off 
          	
          	Likewise, I critiqued your story because people might make fun of or get confused by your story due to the errors. I critiqued your story for the betterment of the plot and writing style. I didn't critique you just to make fun of you.
          	
          	Plus, I could tell English is a second language for you. So I advise you to not use words you don't entirely know the definition of. That applies to phrases as well.
          	
          	"do you have any logical explanations?"
          	
          	I do. I do but then you'd counter me, interrupt me and claim that I'm basing this off of false accusations and baseless evidence.
          	
          	Not only that but age doesn't matter when it comes to judging/critiquing. In my opinion, everybody could critique somebody. For instance, a 13 year old could judge a 17 year old's writing if their writing is shit or the other way around. What I'm saying is, I'm trying to help you so stop being an immature teen and at least listen to my words of advice. 
          	

euphoric_bibliophile

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Honestly, I didnt attack you or whatever you call it. I simply critiqued your story. As you may or may not know, I am a former beta reader. I look our for mistakes and see the progress in the story, character and plot wise. I gave you constructive criticism and you accused me of being judgmental?
          
          Oh and if you didn't "copy" my friend's story, then why did you mute me? Only guilty people do that. Also, why did you assume that it was you I was talking about? Lol. You seemed so affected and pissed off 
          
          Likewise, I critiqued your story because people might make fun of or get confused by your story due to the errors. I critiqued your story for the betterment of the plot and writing style. I didn't critique you just to make fun of you.
          
          Plus, I could tell English is a second language for you. So I advise you to not use words you don't entirely know the definition of. That applies to phrases as well.
          
          "do you have any logical explanations?"
          
          I do. I do but then you'd counter me, interrupt me and claim that I'm basing this off of false accusations and baseless evidence.
          
          Not only that but age doesn't matter when it comes to judging/critiquing. In my opinion, everybody could critique somebody. For instance, a 13 year old could judge a 17 year old's writing if their writing is shit or the other way around. What I'm saying is, I'm trying to help you so stop being an immature teen and at least listen to my words of advice. 
          

empressligaya

Stop. Just stop. 

empressligaya

@arthemina Sorry Hannah, I won't be sending you the next chapter. Please stop, you're hurting people's feelings. 
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euphoric_bibliophile

@arthemina By the way, when are you going to send me the next chapter to your story? 
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euphoric_bibliophile

You know the feeling when you see how hard your friend works on something and they are so proud and happy but then you find someone who copies their work?
          
          Plagiarism isn't cool guys! 

euphoric_bibliophile

@euphoric_bibliophile How are you sure that it's you that I'm talking about? Why are you so affected? 
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Raerene

@euphoric_bibliophile stop saying that I copied it and do you even have any logic explanations?
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