Darkness_isnt_Evil

Sorry I know your getting sick of me but in the critsim I put before what I said at first about the description I meant the snippet or description of the story and the other description meant that saying how characters looked was good but work on your surroundings like what does the school look like or the cemetery.

Darkness_isnt_Evil

Okay its the person that said she'd check out your story and I did. I don't know much about grammar but it looks good, the spellings good too. Now with the description and stuff I want you to delete the angel part and make him just mysterious, in other words don't reveal what he is and have signs leading to him looking like a werewolf or a vampire heck maybe even a bunny rabbit in disguise. But keep the readers guessing then reveal it and BAM!!!! People are blown away way about what he is. Your descriptions and everything else seem good just keep the readers on their toes in other words be like 938274850382748584039223040 puzzle pieces that we (readers) have to put together.