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Hy, I read your book When Sophomore's Collide and I liked it, I liked the asian caracters and the glimpses of its cultures, but I noticed a lot of cliches(?) you could say. I am by no means mean and I don't denigrate, I liked your book. But I see improvement and for some reasons I saw a desire for improvement. The inharitance bussines is by no way up to high schoolars, which are children in the eye of law and are young and foolish. A more realistical aproach would've been that they found out about the whole shannanigans and couldve used the adults ignorance to steal papers/proof or find clues, some kind of teenage Sherlock. More POV(point of view) from Huntes perspective with emotional explanations and insights. Shea's duble bitch face personality is kinda unlikely, why? because she's 17 at most, no matter how smart she'll be, she will not be THAT smart. Instead if a teacher/headmaster/even a evil janitor that's a spy or evil.
I'm no genius so I hope Im not talking shit, but it would far more realistic if you made it as real as posible the only unrealistic detail would be the goody gay relashionship's, that we all enjoy. And I liked how Theo had so much self respect, and the friends closenessness(I'm not sure its corect, I'm not originaly english, so my grammar may suck). And Hunter's insecurity I liked, insecure scared, unsure, that my jam.
Anyway it was good, and I see a great future of good books, may ypur days have fortune and blessings. (If this coment bothers you, delete it. No offense taken.)