amnesiawryts

Cutie will you please clarify what kinda changes I should make regarding the wording in my chapters !???

amnesiawryts

@amnesiawryts okieee  TYSM, I’ll look into that. Really grateful that someone is pointing things out for correction instead of creating chaos.
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eva_blackk

@amnesiawryts heyy, so i personally feel that a few sentences will flow better if you used simple words but in a better order, the writing is good overall, but when it comes to the dialogues a character is saying it's bit here and there.
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amnesiawryts

Heyyy my dear ❣️
          
          Sorry for posting here.
          
            I know you will ignore this one just because I don't have a good amount of views and votes. It's because I'm a new author and haven't caught readers attention. No one is famous from the beginning, remember it. And never judge a book by its cover.
          
          Please give it a try, I promise you will not regret the decision. ⇘⇙
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391526152?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=amnesiawryts 

eva_blackk

@amnesiawryts heyy, please don't say that..i've read countless amount of book and i must tell you it's the underrated ones that have my heart more than anything especially new writers whom i've seen grow into accomplished ones..it takes time yess but you'll do well as long your story has good sense of art and reality.
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